2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

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How to success is a big problem for many people;Everybody want to success;They want to success in getting a love or making much money and so on.But this goals is for many adults.The success of a child maybe win a game.So the meaning of success are different for different people. After many years of growth, I have some experience for the problem. First you need have a clear goals.This goal is your power which be used to get success.Then you need true method in your way to success.How to get ture method? You can turn to some seniors for advice.Then you must stick at your way.You mustn't give up halfway.If you can get these points,I think you have a great possibilities for success;