2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；作者高级词汇方面要多累积，词汇表达不够丰富；复杂句的使用不是很丰富。

An ancient Chinese quote says, "Suzhou and Hangzhou is the heaven on earth".I will recommend Hangzhou as the first destination for my foreign friend's trip. Hangzhou,famous as the centre of Zhejiang province, located at the middle-south of China.Hangzhou is known because of it's beautiful landscape.Hangzhou Xihu is the most representive place.