2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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According to a survey done by Bureau of Labor Statistics and Current Population Survey, for persons aged 25 and over, their weekly earnings in 2011 which includes full-time wage and salary workers are mainly related to their education level. It also tells us that the higher education level you are the lower unemployment rate you in, except for the Doctoral degree. It seems that if one gets a Professional degree , he or she can earn most and be in the lowest unemployment rate which is 1665 dollors earnings and 2.4 percent of unemployment rate. While the average weekly earnings is 797 dollors and go by 7.6 percent in the employment rate. Appearently, people who live poorest are those who get less than high school diploma, which have highest unemployment rate in 14.1 percentage and go by 451 dollors in weekly earnings.To my ashtonishment, the Doctoral degreers pays less than the Professional degree and have a higher unemployment rate. In one words,the Prfessional degree education pays are the most.