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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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According to a survey done by Bureau of Labor Statistics and Current Population Survey, for persons aged 25 and over, their weekly earnings in 2011 which includes full-time wage and salary workers are mainly related to their education level. It also tells us that the higher education level you gets the lower unemployment rate you in, except for the Doctoral degree. It seems that if one gets a Professional degree , he or she can earn most and be in the lowest unemployment rate which is 1665 dollors earnings and 2.4 percent of unemployment rate while the average weekly earnings are 797 dollors and go by 7.6 percent in the employment rate. Apparently, people who live poorest are those who get less than high school diploma, which has highest unemployment rate in 14.1 percent and go by 451 dollors in weekly earnings.To my astonishment, the Doctoral degree pays less than the Professional degree and have a higher unemployment rate. In one word, the Prfessional degree education pays the most.

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