小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

单词拼写做得很好，请注意积累词汇量；结构良好，但是语言不流畅；句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例。

I have a picture on my desk, It is a picture of my friend Jim.The man in this picture is Jim's father, he is a bus driver.And the woman is his mother, she is a teacher, the children that she teach likes to play with Jim. This was Jim's family.