小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

单词拼写做得很好，请注意积累词汇量；若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；结构良好，但是语言不流畅。

I have a picture on my desk, it is a picture of my friend Jim. The man in this picture is Jim's father, he is a bus driver. The woman is his mother, she is a teacher, the children that she teach, likes to play with Jim. This was Jim's family.