单词拼写做得很好,请注意积累词汇量;文章组织结构良好;注意句式在文中的变化,加强一些从句的使用,文章会更棒。
My best friend is Mona, She is my friend in china. But she is leave me last mouth. She have a beautiful long hair, and all the teeth is white. We always play together Maybe she won't come bake and play with me, but she is my best friend for ever.