高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少；作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累高级词汇；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。

My home town in the past, my home town was surrounded by the green trees. there were fish swimming in the river which's water is very clean. people lived in the simply decorated house and the street was not wide.people's life is poor and have to work everyday. since the opening reform, huge change happened to the county. High build stand there and many shopping store nearby. different kind of cars run on the clean wide street. but the speedy industrial development caused many problem, especially the damage of the envirenment. the number of trees decreased sharply. fish disappeared from the polluted river. it is urgent to control the pollutant.