运用了一些简单从句,但不是很熟练;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;文中拼写错误比较多,用词也稍显贫乏。
Dear David, I am glad that you will go to Lanzhou for learning chinese. Chinese is differecult for you.But I believe that you can learn it well. Becase you are very smart. Do not be worry, I will tell you how to learn Chinese easily.It is not differecult for you. First, you should read Chinese book everyday. Second, you should read chinese dirction every momring. Third, you should reapt it before you sleep. If you do that, you will learn chinese well. yours Cheng Chuan