2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Hi,everyone ,It is my honour to introduce my hometown! I was bron in kangDing, SiChuan proverce. KangDing is a very beautful and famous city. Why I will say it is a beautful and famous city. It is not only the weather is very good,but also there people are very hospitation. No matter where you are and no matter which people you meet, when you have problems, many people also would liking to help you.which can make you feel like very kinding and you were not alone. while, in my hometown there have many kind of deciliece food.