作者词汇量提升空间很大,尤其要注意高级词汇积累,另外要注意个别拼写错误;句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化;结构不严谨,几乎没有使用衔接词,上下文衔接欠流畅。
In modern society,the penetration of iphone is very high, so the impact of internet is more biger than biger.It change the method of interpersonal communication .People can contact with each others with mobile phone through internet.They can use wechat send their voice and words.So the internet improve the efficiency of interpersonal communication.Though it have many benefits ,it also have some bad effect.Though the internet improve the efficiency for interpersonal communication,it reduce the chance of meeting for people.People will feel more far away with their friends.
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