正确句子的比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;文章层次较为清晰。
I went to the Beijing zoo last Sunday. There were many tourists. They were giving food to eat for monkey. And they were playing game with tiger. The animals and people were very friendly to each other. We must be kind to animals.So it's protecting the environment very important to us. Don't throw rubbish everywhere in the zoo. If you know protecting the animals is very important to us, because protecting the animals is protecting ourselves.