运用了一些简单从句,但不是很熟练;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;文章用词太过单一,且单词拼写错误较多。
Dear David, I am glad that you will go to Lanzhou for learning Chinese. Chinese is difficult for you. But I believe that you can learn it well. Because you are very smart. Do not be worry, I will tell you how to learn Chinese easily.It is not differecult for you. First, you should read Chinese book everyday. Second, you should read chinese dirction every momring. Third, you should reapt it before you sleep. If you do that, you will learn chinese well. yours Cheng Chuan