若增加一些长难句的使用,文章会更好;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;文中拼写错误稍多,词汇表达贫乏。
Dear David, I am glad that you will go to Lanzhou for learning Chinese. Chinese is difficult for you. But I believe that you can learn it well. Do not worry, I will tell you how to learn Chinese easily.It is not difficult for you. First, you should read Chinese book eveDear David, I am glad that you will go to Lanzhou for learning chinese. Chinese is differecult for you.But I believe that you can learn it well. Becase you are very smart. Do not be worry, I will tell you how to learn Chinese easily.It is not differecult for you. First, you should read Chinese book everyday. Second, you should read chinese dirction every momring. Third, you should reapt it before you sleep. If you do that, you will learn chinese well. yours Cheng Chuan ryday. Second, you should read chinese dirction every momring. Third, you should reapt it before you sleep. If you do that, you will learn chinese well. yours Cheng Chuan