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Dear David, I am glad that you will go to Lanzhou for learning Chinese. Chinese is difficult for you. But I believe that you can learn it well, because you are very smart. Do not worry, I will tell you how to learn Chinese easily. It is not difficult for you. First, you should read Chinese book every day. Second, you should read Chinese dictionary every morning. Third, you should reapt it before you sleep. If you do that, you will learn chinese well. yours Cheng Chuan