2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

作者词汇基本功不错，建议今后多用学术词汇；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

As the table shows, the number that people living in the cities choose to travel outside was increasing.There were 10000 people travelling outside in 1995,and 40000 in 2000, 120000 in 2005.More and more people intended to go travelling on holidays or other special days in the past ten decades. Moreover, the number was changing rapidly. As far as I am concerned, I would like to go on a vacation for several reasons. And I think these are the reasonable causes why this phenomenon happens. First, with the development of our society both mentally and physically, people was becoming rich enough to pay their bills. When people are economic free, they tend to taste much more "yummy" in physical life. And travelling is especially a good choice. Secondly, more people were well-educated as the time goes. For those new-era persons, they have read much more than their ex-generation, thus they knew much more about the outside world.In conclusion it was the spiritual needs that pushed these younger generation to do things that they have read in books. They desired to see new views of our earth. Last but not least, as the internet and trading between countries became much more mature than before, people on earth were closely connected. One can easily learnt fresh things of another country as long as they wanted to, so they had more news to shares with others. On condition that they had time and money to make their dreams real, maybe they would like to have a try. From my point of view, this phenomenon shown in the table really indicate that our world has been moving forward during the past years. And I think that is good. Because that means human beings are involving. But we should also pay attention on the negative impacts. For example, the environment of the scenic spots will be destroyed because of the increasing crowds. In a word, the government should take action to prevent our historic and natural views from damaging. And in the future travelling will be more and more general as the human society involves.