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过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；文章词汇丰富度较好，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。
What Makes a Smart Consumer Nowadays, mobile phone has become a necessity in our daily life. Mobile phone is not just a communication tool, but also our information source. We can find various coupons and group-buy deals, which helped us save some money. However, can we call a man who will not buy clothes unless in a sale a smart consumer? Surely, we can't. A smart consumer is the one who knows how to make a good deal in a proper time by a proper way. First of all, be careful with our money is never wrong in our daily life, but that don't mean save money is a top priority in every deal. For example, when you want to buy a TV, you find there are two stores sell it, but the price vary considerablely. After consieration, you choose the cheaper one to save amount of money. But after a while, you probably encounter some quality problems with lower quality after sale service, which means you should use a large amount money to repaire it which is much more than what you've saved before. Moreover, it can also affects your mood. Secondly, to collect coupons or try to find group-buy deals consumes a lot of time and most of them are useless, because most of them has limit time and content which maybe not suitable for you to use. The most smart deal is to make a deal in a proper deal at a proper time. If the deal is made on the price of your precious time, it is not so wise. If the deal means to sacrifice some of the qualities you insists before, then it is not a good deal. You're not a smart consumer. To sum up, save money can not make a smart consumer. A consumer who values quality and service prior to price is a smart consumer.
