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I have a friend he is very hansom. He is tweenty-four year old. He for me very good . We already know already five years. Sometimes he very funny , he have drive and buisinese. one time , I'm going to his home . he very happy , i call he phone before go his home. and get his home time,he cook for me . untill night i return my home . today play very happy