文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;作者应在平时练习中加强复杂句的练习;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Dear David I am glad that you will go to Lanzhou in order to learn Chinese. It is quite difficult for you to master Chinese because you do not come from Chinese. But I believe that you can learn it well because you are very smart. Moreover, I will teach you how to study Chinese effectively. Therefore, learn Chinese is not difficult for you anymore. Firstly, you should read Chinese book every day. Secondly, you should read Chinese dictionary every morning. At last, you should read the book again before you sleep. If you do that, you will learn Chinese well. I hope you can learn well. Best wishes to you. Your friend Chen Chuang