希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;作者应在平时练习中加强复杂句的练习;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Dear David I am glad that you will go to Lanzhou in order to learn Chinese. It is quite difficult for you to master Chinese because you do not come from Chinese. But I believe that you can learn it well because you are very smart. Moreover, I will teach you how to study Chinese effectively. Therefore learning Chinese isn't difficult anymore for you. There are some suggestions. Firstly, you should read Chinese book every day. Secondly, you should read Chinese dictionary every morning. At last, you should read the book again before you sleep. If you do that, you will learn Chinese well. I hope you can learn well. Best wishes to you. Your friend Chen Chuang