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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9028
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

用户的作文(系统评分59.5分
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句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;文中能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强。

用户练习作文:

The impact of the Internet on learnning With the development of science and technoiogy, more and more people that Internet have powerful. So,people dependent on it, as is shown in the graph,the little boy asked his mother:once he learn how to use Google,isn't that all the education he really need? It was obvious that the Internet is important for people in various convenient.For example ,people use the online dating,entertainment,through the network leayning.Network focus on the wisdom of human beings,student can learn anything.It's another of the students teacher. It's natural to believe that Internet on learning ,but we shouldn't ignore that leaning offline.we shouldn't too dependent on the Internet.It will make us lose the ability of indendent thinging.If things go on like this, human will failur. All in all,leaning is very sytes,we must make ourself have ability on education.

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