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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
从句使用量稍显不足；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
The impact of the Internet on learning With the development of science and technoiogy, more and more people that Internet has power. So, people dependent on it, as is shown in the graph, the little boy asked his mother:once he learns how to use Google, isn't that all the education he really needs? It was obvious that the Internet is important for people in various convenient. For example, people use the online dating, entertainment,through the network leayning. Network focus on the wisdom of human beings, student can learn anything. It's another of the student teacher. It's natural to believe that Internet on learning, but we shouldn't ignore that leaning offline. We shouldn't too dependent on the Internet. It will make us lose the ability of indendent things. If things go on like this, human will failure. All in all,leaning is very importance, we must make ourself have ability on education.
