1995年专四作文真题范文:Discuss part-time job

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Summer is coming,so waht should we do?I often hear this sound:we should find a part-time job.In recent years,more and more colleges studentsbegin to take part-time job in their spare time to earn pocket money or even college fees.From my standpoint,taking part-time job has advantages as well as disadvatage. Are you rich?Doing part-time job can take some money for you,so you don't ask your parents.Of course,you can learn some experence from that,which can help you when you enter society. However,if you use two months to do it,you will waste much time.As students,the ability of us is learning.Everyone's energy is limit. To summary,doing part-time job likes coins, it has two sides,so the most important for us to do is to balance the two aspects well.