若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Now, the middle school student has too more pressure for study. They using to many times to learning every day, and they stay up late at night. So they overlook part in sports. Their body is in a state of sub health。 For example, a student name is Chen Hua. He is learning in middle school now. After he falls ill, he understands in good health important to good life. Now he does except to studies hard, he also actively part in all kinds of exercises activities.