若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Now, the middle school student has too more pressure for study. They using to many times to learning every day, and they stay up late at night. So they overlook part in sports. Their body is in a state of sub health。 For example, the student name is Chen Hua. He is learning in middle school now. After he falls ill, he understands in good health very important. Now he does except to studies hard, he also actively part in all kinds of exercises activities.