希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;作者应在平时练习中加强复杂句的练习;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Recently our class had a discussion about what they would do in the coming summer vacation. Here is the result: Tina said: She wants to go to Beijing, because she wants to see the Great Wall and other beautiful sights in Beijing. It has fun. Jim said: He wants to stay at home. Because he feels tired to travel. He would have a good rest. He doesn't to go to travel when his summer vacation. I said: I want to go to Dali, because Dali has too many natural sights, the air is fresh, the water is clear. I'd like to close to nature.