2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；若注意部分错误，文章会更漂亮；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

Right now, overusing telephone has become the most topic. In everyone's life, telephone has become more and more important and maybe someone can't live without the telephone. In the street, we can see a lot of people looking at their cell phones, even crossing the street. But overusing cell phone is not good to us. first, many person accurcom to using cell phone even when he is crossing the crossstreets, this behevor is very dangerous. secondly, the people who has fall to control themselies, which can esaily indulge and forget to do what the should do. the last but not the least, everyday we take a lot of time to use telephone, it is harm to our health, not only harm for physical health but also mental health.