小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。

I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl.She has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. Her voice is better. She is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books, playing computer games and chess. She is also nice.She often helps us.Our classmates like her very much.