正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,对拼写检查也要重视;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl.She has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. Her voice is better.She is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books,playing computer games and chess.She is also nice.She often helps usOur classmates like her very much.