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When it comes to the two-day weekend ,the university students' opinion differ from person to person. There is no doubt that,it has its drawback as well as merits.Some hold that it can let us relax and we can study other abilities . But others view that it will give more time to the students who always play the computer games ,and they likely do not study. Form my point of view,it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather the second.In the two-day weekend,I will write down my plan so that it let me what I should do.For example ,I can do some reading ,do some sport and so on.I maybe will play computer games,but I am no addicted to it.As the saying goes,alternate work and rest .
