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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5946[网页划词已开启]
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
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高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;若注意部分错误,文章会更漂亮。

用户练习作文:

It's rather hard for me to give accurate stance which side i would choose.As for my personal intention,i prefer to living in rural areas instead of urban district.Some one may render a list a pile of disadvantages of living outside city-far away from the workplace,with much inconvenience if someone gets sick,lack of effective safety etc. On the contrast,living in the prosperous city,we could enjoy any entertainments we would like to.Also if some thoughts emerge in your mind(like watching movie ,go to buffet ),you just go straight to the place where it was located in just few mins.Another thing is th neighbor relationship.You will get swiftly familiar with your neighbor when you lived in rural area,and you two will get even fast to fall into a reciprocal relation.What happen if someone lives in city?As you lived closely door to door to your neighbor ,you and he/she probably are still strangers. Living in an advanced city,why not just enjoy the convenience it brings to us,the high civilization it offers us,the positive pressure it throw on us?

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