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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5942
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分84.5分
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高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。

用户练习作文:

It's rather hard for me to give accurate stance which side I would choose.As for my personal intention, I prefer to live in rural areas instead of urban districts.Some one may display a pile of disadvantages of living outside city-far away from the workplace,with much inconvenience if someone gets sick,lacking effective safety etc. On the contrary,living in the prosperous city,we could enjoy any entertainments we would like to. Also if some thoughts emerge in your mind(like watching movie ,going to buffet), you just go straight to the place where it was located in just few mins. Another thing is the neighbor relationship. You will get swiftly familiar with your neighbor when you lived in rural areas, and you two will get even fast to fall into a reciprocal relation. What happened if someone lives in city?As you lived closely door to door to your neighbor ,you and he/she probably still are stranger. Living in an advanced city, why not just enjoy the convenience it brings to us,the high civilization it offers us,the positive pressure it throws on us?

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