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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36945
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分36.0分
评语:

可将文中的简单句转换为长句或者复杂句;文中单词拼写做的不错,另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

I have a good friend,and his name is Tobby. He is a very nice guy and he is very intresting too. We often play basketball at school and many other games so that we have a lot of fun together. Also Tobby is a cute and good-looking boy. He has blown hair and and two big beautiful eyes. At the same time,Tobby is a warm-hearted boy because he loves to help people. I am glad that I have such a good friend.

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