小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

I have a good friend, whose name is Tobby. He is a very nice guy and he is very interesting too. We often play basketball at school and many other games so that we have a lot of fun together. Also Tobby is a cute and good-looking boy. He has blown hair and beautiful eyes. At the same time,Tobby is a warm-hearted boy because he loves to help people. I am glad that I have such a good friend.