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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量。

用户练习作文:

As the saying goes, you can't judge a book by its cover. It is unwise to judge a person by his appearance. Here are three main reasons. First, people can't change their looking because it's born with them. Some people are actually kind but they just get a very scary face, which is decided by their genes. In the literature world, beauty often appears along with kindness. However, in real life, at least so far, there is no any data showing that characters have anything to do with lookings. What's more, makeup and dressing can in some way change the way people look. That is to say, appearance is a changeable thing, and it is not necessarily consistent with people's mind. Besides, human is a complicated being and we often have both the dark side and the light side. Although to some extent, our behaviors may imply which society class we belong to, we know how to disguise ourselves, for example, the spies in the history lived as totally different people of various characters. In a word, people's characters and his experiences are not directly related to their looks so judging a person merely by his appearance can easily cause trouble.

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