托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

I agree with this opinion, when i was young, i always do as i think which turns out to be wrong at last, we alway achive from failure, but could we keep careful consideration before our action, as we grow up, we know that we should think more and more to distinguish which decision we should make, we got it first, lost it at last, which derive from our careless，be cautious before we make a conclusion, limited impact will occure in our life, but the rest i achive by myself, anything we should learning to be utiliarize no matter how much we should cost, what we would lost. presumably we would get succeed, we would meet who is vicious, but keep our good moral character, every dog has its day, everything will turn out to be ok.