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Emerging from this picture is an alarming scene that the one that mass species fish in the ocean at 1990, while only one commercial ship is fishing. But another that a large mount of commercial ship is fishing the only that the ocean mere remain at 1995. Evidently, the nature resource have been run out. It is deeply rooted in the mind of generally public that no other eras play more emphasize on the environmental protection than today. But this view is still applicably? I don’t reckon so. Cases against this opinion are abundant and with easy reach. Firstly, it is not surprise to see some folks hunting wild-animals for fun, cooking them for food, selling them for profit. In addition, it is not rare to notice that some human beings cutting trees for money, farmland, or firewood. What the hell happened to us? Traditionally, they loss the sense of environmental protection is considered. The real reason, in fact, may be just be diverse: Aren’t the sense of environmental protection swallowed by their greediness? Given all this . To serve as responsible stewards of the planet. I hold the view that we need legislation from department concerned, intervention from environment groups, and supervision from the mass media. Apart from we also need the awareness that we would be homeless if we mistreat our planet earth----the only home of us.
