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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9068
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

用户的作文(系统评分67.0分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;能够使用一些不错的从句;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,高级词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

Above the picture, we can see there is a conversion between a student and a teacher. The student said" Once I learn how to use Google, isn't that all the education I really need?" The picture did not tell us what the teacher said, but I can confirm to tell everyone that it is far enough to learn education from Google or other web. maybe you will ask why? Now let me to tell why we can not only acquire acknowledge from web. To begin with, so many persons are over depend on Google, which lead them do not like to use their mind when they meet problems. secondly, the information obtain from the Google often lead person thought, there is noly one way to solve this problem. so in the long run it can make people so egoist. Moreover,the information which form interent are often not correct. As for as I am concerned, there are a lot of path to obtain education and interent is just only one way.

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