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Save money When it comes to talk about saving money, some people hold the idea that as a student, we should use less money, because it is not easy to make money for parents. However, others perfer to say students ought to spend as much money as possible. For parents try their best to give their children a better life. people's views vary from person to person, and in my ipinion. I'd like to say that we should use our money in a right way. The reasons are as follows. Firstly, with the rapid growth of the economic, parents tend to give their children as much money as possilbe, which could cause students spend a lot of money. What's worse, can you imagine that children would become shopaholic. Besides, students will understand it is difficult to earn money if parents give less money. Last but not least, people who use many kinds of coupons can save many money, and they can buy something that they really need, like books, choth, and so on. In shot, it is wise to buy something carefully. At least, in my views, which is a great habit.
