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请作者增加高级词汇的使用，不过单词拼写做的很好；文中如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
Save money When it comes to talk about saving money, some people hold the idea that students should not spend a lot. Because it is not easy to make money. However, others prefer their children spend as much money as they can. Person's views vary from person to person. For me, I think as a student we should use less. Take one more example. There is a woman that she saved 120000 yuan after she works within 2 years, which is incredible. And a report asked her how it was accomplished. She said I collect many kinds of coupons and try not to go shopping. Therefore, I can save a lot of money to reduce my parent's pressure. So at least, I believe that it is a good habit we collect coupons, and look for group-buy deals if we eat or travel out. What's more important, we will understand make money is hard by saving money. Last but not least, we can feel a sense of accomplishment when we buy gifts for our parents use our own money. In short, we ought to use less money, and save money to buy some stuff that we really need.
