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文中词汇表达方面较丰富灵活，但在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。
As the computer technology develops so fast, online shopping has become a new fashion.Nearly everyone have the experience shopping online, some even do all the shopping online instead of going out. Online shopping brings us convenience, it helps us save time in such a busy society.Besides, it is well-rounded. Everything you want can all be foud in the internet, you can compare the products without walk in two or more different markets. However,every coins have two sides.Online shopping also has many disadvantages.First you it can not granted the quality of the products, because you can not feeling them by yourself.Moreover,the product you buy may not suit you both in size and type. In my opinon, when you shopping online, it will be wise for you to buy the things, which has stated clearly about its size and item.Online shopping has being a new trend, we can take use of it in proper way to make our life more covenient and efficent.
