语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;文章词汇表达不够丰富,在拼写方面也要继续努力。
We are living in a spacious world,which is full with rumors,so we have to learn how to distinguish what is true and what is wrong.In most time,we are always easy to believe what we have looked and heared,but in fact,it may be one kinds of foolish behavior. In most time,what we looked or heared may be only the small part of truth,it will make us know something but not all.When we know someting,we will immediately take a conclusion,but it is not brilliant.
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