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As the technology develops rapidly, online shopping has become a new fashion.Nearly everyone had shoped online, some even do all the shopping online instead of going out. Online shopping brings convenience to life, it helps us save time in such a busy life. Besides, it is well-rounded. Everything you want can all be foud on the internet, you can compare the products without walk in two or more different markets. However, every coin has two sides.Online shopping also has many disadvantages.First of all, it can not granted the quality of the products, because you can not feel them by yourself. Moreover,the product you buy may not suit you both in size and type. In my opinion, when you shopping online, it will be wise for you to buy the things, which has stated clearly about its size and item.Online shopping has become a new trend, we can take use of it in a proper way to make our life more convenient and efficient.
