英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 英语六级> 真题> 2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40892
要求:
题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
评语:

采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;适当增加一些复杂句的使用,文章会更棒;作者词汇表达不够多样,希望能多使用高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

We are living in a spacious world,which is full of rumors,so we have to learn how to distinguish what is true and what is wrong.In most times,we are always easy to believe what we have looked and heard,but in fact,it may be one kind of foolish behavior. In most times,what we looked or heard may be only the small part of truth,it will make us know something but not all.When we know something,we will immediately take a conclusion,but it is not brilliant.As the saying goes,only taking one part of essay and knowing it's meaning.In real life,people are not certain,when someone heard someting and tell it to another one,it might have some difference between what he heard and what he told. in a word,taking a conclusion immediately when we looked or heard something.We have to learn how to distinguish truth and fault.

会员评论0个评论)
suspect1234
金币:3

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:92.0xuganjun1997

人气:80发布:2017-05-01

得分:91.0terrykk

人气:33发布:2014-11-18

得分:90.01123242546

人气:73发布:2014-09-19

得分:89.5Nick`c

人气:46发布:2014-07-09

得分:89.5awesomekaro

人气:51发布:2014-08-14