采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;适当增加一些复杂句的使用,文章会更棒;作者词汇表达不够多样,希望能多使用高级词汇。
We are living in a spacious world,which is full of rumors,so we have to learn how to distinguish what is true and what is wrong.In most times,we are always easy to believe what we have looked and heard,but in fact,it may be one kind of foolish behavior. In most times,what we looked or heard may be only the small part of truth,it will make us know something but not all.When we know something,we will immediately take a conclusion,but it is not brilliant.As the saying goes,only taking one part of essay and knowing it's meaning.In real life,people are not certain,when someone heard someting and tell it to another one,it might have some difference between what he heard and what he told. in a word,taking a conclusion immediately when we looked or heard something.We have to learn how to distinguish truth and fault.
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