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假如你是李明，你的班里来了一位英国交换生Paul。他在和你的交谈中表示在中国学习压力很大。请你给他写封信，给他提一些建议。
3．多做运动，运动可以帮助自己缓解压力，并且有助于睡眠。
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Dear Paul, I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from.Here are my sugestions on how to deal with the pressure of sutdy.Firstly,you can tell your problem to your teacher or your classmates asking them for help.Secendly,you'd better always think about your progress rather than your goal,which can build up your confidence.Last but not least,do more exrecise for it can help you relax as well as sleep better.I hope the advices above could help you a lot. Best wishes!
