高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；简单句偏多了；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

I am glad to introduce my hometwon to you. From past till now , my hometown had changed a lot. I stil remember the past landscape before it changed. At thate time , my hometown was a little town. There were evergreen which arround the small town. The fish in the river whom played happliy. We childhood spent in shanties. The road was narrow. People need work hard every day that they can live. Right now, there are many skyscrapers which are very high in my hometwon. The transportation is very powerful. But the industrial development lead to environment became terrible. There were not more trees than before. There was no fish in the river. Thus i advice government to deal with contamination.