高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

正确句子的比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

I am agreeable to introduce my hometown to you. From past till now, my hometown had changed a lot. I still memorize the past landscape before it changed. At that time, my hometown was a little town. There were evergreens around the small town. The fish in the river whom played happily. Unfortunately, the houses just were shanties. The road was narrow. People need work hard every day that they can live. Right now, there are many skyscrapers which are very high in my hometown. Transportation is very powerful. But the industrial development lead to environment became terrible. There were not more trees than before. There was no fish in the stream. Thus I advise government to govern contamination.