小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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My cat My cat's name is Xi Xi. Xi Xi has a white and gray fur. Xi Xi is a male cat. He has joined my family about two years. Two years ago,when I and my wife come back to our house after a vacation.We found a mouse in our bedroom. It scared my wife very much,so I think maybe we need a cat. In the internet,there are several people present little cats to anyone who need it.So,in the next day, I have contact one of them,and we make an appointment.Then my wife went to meet her,and got back little Xi Xi.