采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
I think it is unsensible to get a conclusion whenever you see or hear from something.Because often the truths are hiden beneath the surface. If we only draw the conclusion from the surface,we are often cheated. It need our hard work and intelligence to explore the trues from the falsification.For example, in ancient time,people believe the earth is the center,the sun and moon revolve around it,because people see the sun rises from orient and sinks in the west everyday.But as the developing of science,people use telescope to observe the whole space and find the truth which is the earth is revolving around the sun.
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