2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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On Excessive Packaging Right now, on excessive packaging has become more and more hot topic. If you buy a mooncake, you will find the packaging is pettey, but we only want the mooncake not the packaging. Why the excessive packaging is so popular. To begin with, so many company pay much attention on packaging, the simply think only the excessive packaging can customes want to buy their goods. secondly, when the hostiday coming we should give our parents or friends. so we need the excessive packaging. Last but not least, we don't relice that the wast the good. As far as my concended, packaging is only to procket the goods. so we don't need the excessive packaging.